The opener was eehhh. A bit too generic. I'm not trying to be rude, but it's been done a bit too many times. You possibly could have gotten the chest DM with the lumbar out of that first kick. Transition to the second kick was pretty basic, but did the job. The second kick itself was alright, you definitely could have gotten the decap to make that a boom kick. I don't think the skeet was necessary considering how it wasn't too noticeable. Even so, you definitely could have made the skeetcap without having to grab uke. Afterwards, the pose was alright, but you didn't have to have your right knee fully extended. A good replay overall, but not too amazing.
Originally Posted by Kiza
The opener was eehhh. A bit too generic. I'm not trying to be rude, but it's been done a bit too many times. You possibly could have gotten the chest DM with the lumbar out of that first kick. Transition to the second kick was pretty basic, but did the job. The second kick itself was alright, you definitely could have gotten the decap to make that a boom kick. I don't think the skeet was necessary considering how it wasn't too noticeable. Even so, you definitely could have made the skeetcap without having to grab uke. Afterwards, the pose was alright, but you didn't have to have your right knee fully extended. A good replay overall, but not too amazing.
Yeah i know, i was actually wanting to only get the arms off on the second kick. The opener came when i tried to see how much power and speed to a kick i could get, so basicly this was a test replay until i saw the opportunity to expand it. the skeet itself was hard seeing as the head part was constantly spinning which gave me less time to get enough power into a proper skeet, i hope you understand.
Thank you for the CnC!
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