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Originally Posted by Caveisier View Post
Sketch for Switch Around.
WARNING, it's weird and disturbing.

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I don't even know what is this.

I love this. Are you going to color it? I think it would look very nice with bright colors, minimalistic (manga) artstyle at the top and really shaded dark colors and a grim realistic artstyle for the tentacles. It would make a great contrast, you know?

Good job on all of this. It's amazing to see someone in this community making art that looks this good. There are only some minor shading/anatomy things that looks a bit off to me, but I don't feel competent enough in art to say anything constructive.
Last edited by Lazors; Jan 29, 2016 at 09:33 AM.
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Originally Posted by Lazors View Post
I love this. Are you going to color it? I think it would look very nice with bright colors, minimalistic (manga) artstyle at the top and really shaded dark colors and a grim realistic artstyle for the tentacles. It would make a great contrast, you know?

Good job on all of this. It's amazing to see someone in this community making art that looks this good. There are only some minor shading/anatomy things that looks a bit off to me, but I don't feel competent enough in art to say anything constructive.

Thanks!
No, I'm not, but iAwesome gonna color it since we are doing a Switch Around. I make the lineart and he color the drawing and vice versa.

Anyway, I'm really appreciate if you give me a critic or opinion on the drawing even you're not into drawing art.
I remember when my drawing skill was not as good as now, some of my friend who don't even know how to draw gave me a critic about my drawings, for example like about the proportion. At that time I ignored what they said because I think they don't have any idea about drawing. But after a few years later I try to take a look on my old drawings and I'm pretty surprised that what my friends said a few years ago about the critic was right.
So yeah, until now I usually ask to my internet friends who don't even know about drawing for CnC on my drawings.
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Well, you asked for it. Since everyone is busy critiquing boob anatomy this might be of some use at least.

Originally Posted by Caveisier View Post
Water balloon fixed.

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The left shoulder is way too high, even for the pose she's making. It looks really out of place to me.

Originally Posted by Caveisier View Post
Ah yeah, I think it looks better too. Not sure why I did it.

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The cap shading looks off to me. Too much shading just over the visor. I also think there should be a stronger shade below the visor.
Your mouths tend to go very low and it almost bothers me but it also adds to the expression so I'll just mention it as a thing.
Last edited by Lazors; Jan 29, 2016 at 05:00 PM.
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Oh, I thought you're gonna commenting on that disturbing girl.

About the first drawing, yeah I know that I made a mistake there. Sometimes I realize a mistake lately after I finished it.

The second one, yeah, I was kinda confused when making the shade under the visor. I tried to add more shade but it wasn't looks good. I think it's because of the perspective of the hat which is messed up.
About the mouth, I found that it's pretty common expression out there in manga style usually for a tsundere like personality.

Thanks for the input anyway!
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Cave, you're outstanding when it comes to the anime art style. You better use this talent in a future career.

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Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
Cave, you're outstanding when it comes to the anime art style. You better use this talent in a future career.

Thanks, and yeah I hope. And I believe it's pretty hard to find it, especially in my country.
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really nice work and you really do know your stuff. The eyes on your pieces seem a bit weird though, the pupils look like you are trying to make the eye more realistic, but the rest of the eye is your average anime style. Perhaps play with the pupil shape
Originally Posted by Caveisier View Post

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in this piece particular it even gives the right eye a sort of look that it's lazy eyed/ a dead eye.
Last edited by Day; Feb 5, 2016 at 03:22 AM.
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