Originally Posted by
Tabby
19 Hours Ago
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I was drawing and got distracted :^(
Tabs MM- Sucy your openers are trash.rpl: won't say this replay is too different from the last one, loved your opener with wrist dm, but you didn't pay off this move, you started doing some spins ignoring uke. At first I thought you was going to shoot that hand in uke soon after you dm'd it.
Well, everything looked fine so far, anyways, but your transition from spins to uke was kind of "lazy". Not meant to offense but looked like you just pushed your body to uke so you could grab him, also you ghosted (frame 1175).
From then on, pretty neat dm, the wrist dm payed off with the triple skeet and everything really well done, great job performing fluid and controlled moves. Although, I noticed two things: your kick felt somewhat powerless (even though it was a nice dm), but the move itself was kind of slow; and taking back this speed issue, your "acceleration" thing still bothers a bit, but in this replay it was covered by your dms and skeets, you didn't stay too long doing spins and bullshit (which I'm not a fan).
Sick triple skeet, the excessive presence of (great) skeets represents (to me) your signature. Talking on that, I was inspired for this and usually I'm trying to perform skeets in my replays too! Anyways, your skeets were clean, almost no twitches (I noticed one), your body was completely controlled and the power, aiming and angle of all skeets were candy.
You could just finish by there, but you went after uke thirsty for more so... Nice spin after the last skeet but you could use your chest more wisely, most part of this spin was done without your chest, but that is minor. The next idea of lifting uke with a kick was pretty cool but I think you could have done better, the lifting kick itself was kinda forced. Your grab was somewhat brilliant in my opinion, I'd have grabbed first spot I touched but you aimed the head and made good use of that, uh... Kind of.
Wasn't the nicest thing to see you using your knee in the first hit, and looked like your leg slipped, but the last hit was pretty neat (paying off your head grab).
I want to give prominence to your first boomhit (glutes and hip), and your very last one, without mentioning your skeets. Overall, not a masterpiece but also not a bad replay, actually I think it was a good replay but I didn't like what/when/how you performed your moves so I'd recommend you to work more in the "conception" part of your replays.