Cham:you read my mind...but i can't put the theme for my stories
and my current part time job have a little pay
Argghh....my idea just ran out should i continue Noir~the darkness revealed or make a new story
well..actually already got one but can't find the right opening for the novel
got it,this is the WIP what do you think guys
[My name is Leonidas Gallant,i am a trouble kid, well actually not really a trouble but everyone sees me as a trouble. I am from a rich family and my connection with my family is really severe, we often have an argument recently, until 1 day the argument already at the peak "Leo!!! you must be our successor and to be our successor you don't need this item" my father mad like a mad horse throwing my stuff including my precious thing that given by my deceased little sister, an old rubber ball that she made before she died, i almost lost it if i didn't manage to grab it and fall from my 2nd floor room.I land on bushes, my anger is already on peak i run from my house as fast as i could, many my father bodyguard that try to hold me up, but my bodyguards help me out, he is like my only friend here, he know when i was in trouble or need an assistance.
I run to city park and take a rest, suddenly my bodyguard appear "Carter why you are here? if my father notice that i and you were gone you gonna be in trouble" My bodyguard's name is Dwayne Carter his age is 5 years older than me and the youngest bodyguards on my house but have a remarkable skill on martial arts and intel, i rarely count him as my bodyguards, i count him as a big brother that i always want "I am loyal to you young master" he bow down to me. "Carter stop teasing me,you know that i hate to be call young master" what i dislike from him that he like to tease me up, he ruffle my head "I know,sorry Leo, anyway even if i was there i'll be punish by letting you go" he have cheerful smile "Now where we will go?" Carter ask.I don't know how to answer that until suddenly i notice a familiar 2 bow tie ponytail girl take a stroll on the park.
All i need is to fix the grammar
Last edited by Trice; Jan 3, 2013 at 11:48 AM.