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The opener was good in general, it just seemed a bit twitchy at some point.
Great hit, I like it
The next boom was pretty clean and destructive, looking good
The self damage was great, pretty clean hit there

Very enjoyable, would watch again
oh yeah
Hey guys here's something quick I did.

It's for the event.

I might change it later but this is my entry as of now.
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Night of nights.rpl (304.8 KB, 18 views)
\o\ | ORMO | OSHI | OLDA | [duck] | Team Canada | Maple Syrup United | Team Philippines | [UssR] | Anime United | /o/
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\o\ | ORMO | OSHI | OLDA | [duck] | Team Canada | Maple Syrup United | Team Philippines | [UssR] | Anime United | /o/
The manip looked great, I loved how you got back to Uke after tossing him away
The next kick didn't look very solid, but it was a nice boom
The chest boom had a strange angle, but it did it's job
The decap was not impressive at all
oh yeah
As pusga said, the manip looked really good.
The kick was really nice imo.
Second too.
But I feel like the decap is to... How could I say it? Uh... Its like direct impact and destroys the ending flow.
Good job anyways.
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Manip was okay, what caught my eye there was how beautiful your launch to the flying uke is. The booms were pretty nice too but nothing particularly interesting.
As Hours said, the final decap broke the flow and the pose wasn't still.
Still, nice replay.
Manip was nice, like others said I love how you launch to uke after kicking him
I usually see kicking with extending ankle is a little strange, but this time, the kick was awesome
On your second kick, I love how you use your right leg to help your hand making uke closer.
The kick itself was good.
The decap was ok
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Thanks for the comments guys! C:

I heard a lot of negative attention for the decap kick so I decided to scrap it and make a nicer kick.

I also tried to lengthen the flow of the replay because many of you said the flow at the end was bad.
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Night of Nights 2.rpl (329.0 KB, 14 views)
Last edited by MrJingles; Oct 22, 2012 at 10:54 PM.
\o\ | ORMO | OSHI | OLDA | [duck] | Team Canada | Maple Syrup United | Team Philippines | [UssR] | Anime United | /o/
The launch you did to uke was good. The spinny thing you did when you were approaching uke could have been done a lot faster but eh, it would have done the job either way. The following booms were great, no noticeable flaws on that one. The decap and the pose were nice but the pose coul've been a lot more solid.
Well, great hit, looked powerful.
The second boom looked messy, but another side it looked amazing.
The decap was looked cool, stylish.
Nice pose.
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