I started on the second chapter for a story i'm writing. I believe I posted an incomplete version of the first chapter shortly after I joined.
Anywho, here's what I've got on the second chapter thus far.
It's about 35degrees C here at the moment, so I may not get more written until tomorrow morning.
I was on something very soft. So soft, it kind of felt like a cloud.
Am I dead? I thought to myself, as I tried moving my arms. A sharp pain shot up both my arms, and I realized I wasn’t dead. I remember hearing a few priests and priestesses saying pain and unhappy memories couldn’t follow a Soul into the Essence.
I opened my eyes a little to try and figure out where I was. All I could see in the dimly lit room was the roof. I tried sitting up, but the pain was mind numbing, so I stayed on my back.
Then the memories of being chased through the forest came back to me suddenly, so vivid and without warning. In response, my muscles tensed up, ready to lash out if needed, and I bolted upright, eyes open, quickly scanning the room for signs of danger. Then my muscles screamed at me, as wave after wave of intense, mind numbing pain washed over my entire body. The pain was too much to bear, and I let out an animal-like howl of pain, my back arching, as I slowly fell back onto the bed. To my right, to door burst open, a healer and my companion from the chase rushing through the doorway.
“Don’t move! Your body hasn’t fully healed yet!” the healer said to me fiercely
Also, do note that's only a rough draft. I'll go over it and add more detail once I've written a paragraph or two more.