k Aoc, don't take this as a bad comment, I'm just going to tell the truth
First of all, try and get sony vegas, it's waaaay better than wmm and it lets you make way better stuff easily. You NEED to /opt hud 0 and try and get some shaders. Iunno what did you use, but I'm assuming it wasn't fraps, get fraps, and record with it instead, you'll get way smoother clips.
So yeah, the vid is pretty bad overall, but you should keep trying ;)