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The heads give a very crazy/bloodlust expression, I love the heads, tell me when you are selling them because I might want to buy one. But the error in the heads is that the hair is just a bunch of zigzags, it is too plain, feather it a little and make it un-even. Also, the head with the orange hair might look better if you make the mouth a little bigger, into a rectangle shape, but don't get too carried away with that, just a little bit, it might give a more crazy/bloodlust expression.
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
if ur gna do anime heads, start by remaking some charatcters from a series, maybe then you'll understand what makes it anime.

atm your heads are just cartoon/emo heads

also, eyes need to be lowered slightly, theyr very high up on the head

i did remake a head sometime a go



and here is a head i made sometime ago

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Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
if ur gna do anime heads, start by remaking some charatcters from a series, maybe then you'll understand what makes it anime.

atm your heads are just cartoon/emo heads

also, eyes need to be lowered slightly, theyr very high up on the head


YES!

Haha bendover already made a version of that one with the facemask too XD

Well the first one has a smile to long. Keep in mind the stretching.

I don't like how forward the hair comes. It's not too natural looking....

I'm not a fan of this style much. It's too flat. No depth...

What I love about bend's anime heads is that the border lines are smooth, and there is good shading. Still anime styled shading, so it's like, true anime look

We need more of those heads ^_^
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Hey who said straight lines for hair isn't good for anime. its an great idea. also ummm maybe u can lower some of ur eyes and hair for the heads a bit.
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You might want to put some shadows and shadings in the hair in the other layers. This IMO is not anime, it looks more like a cartoon head :P

The eye style you used just didn't fit in with any of the heads, it stands out too much, and doesn't really look like an eye.
I like it

It's better than the previous ones.

You might want to make the line thicknesses vary though.

Like make them thicker or thinner as they go along. It would make it have a more professional look I think. Like thinner at the ends, and maybe thicker at the corners


You could try this povray code though
http://www.box.net/shared/df18hgqca4

-w100 -h100 initial_frame=0 final_frame=240

240 frames of sexiness :>
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