Great shading.
Needs more help on the sharpness.
But i like how it looks like leather.
7/10

I think it would look good in platinum and vamp.

Needs more detail,9/10 :3 but i like it.

Great detail and use of shading/lighting.
The seam is there because it is on a transparent canvas. Just cut it and paste it onto a blank, white canvas, and save it over the original file.
:D

dunno what these people are on about with the "great shading" and "great detail" bits.

still looks like an early phase of a WIP to me because of the lines.
the shading would be ok, BUT it doesnt because of the lines. lines and shading dont agree with each other...
dont see the leather part... looks like a helmet, but not necesarily a fighter pilot helmet or leather one...

no issues with the colours.

BenD, how should I get rid of the lines?
Can you help me on this part?
Because my general style kind of relies on lines.
I do want to improve and if you can help, it would be great.

I dont mind the lines honestly, its the shading that i was mainly critting, the shading needs to follow the lines more.

Okay,

I will try to follow the lines more on a new head.
I like how this one looks so I wont change this one.