Ohai Metro.
I <3 that Opener but I thought the kick could do work.
Here's an example of a replay using a Manipulation. I turned ur Replay to a Decap. Anyways to rate that Replay I like that Split and DM.
Number Rating: 7.5/10
Your replays are smooth but slow, speed is the key to an epic replay. Your latest one was by far the best, but it still needed more speed. Speed = booms, and even if you don't really want any, it still looks good.
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'm just sad that I can't give myself one
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'd have a great time
Try Doing a different style while keeping smoothness.
Like your Replay was a split first then try to make it a madman. Or like use your opener in different ways like that I did there.
Marco, FIFTY, Gugu, everybody in this thread, i owe you heaps of thanks for your comments. It's only page two and i feel you guys are helping heaps. Right now i'm going to try and improve that replay.
EDIT:I almost forgot, i made this kick earlier today. Alot better, if i do say so myself.
Permission granted, Marco. I would love to see more, hopefully i can get some ideas and make an edit of my own. Also, Alan, thanks for the advice. I realize that e is for edit, and i will try relax for you. Sounds dirty, no? ;]