1st: nice very powerful hits maybe sometimes a bit!! graby but thats ok
2nd:nice hits , nice tempo....after the hits a little stiff try to make the skeet earlier!
hmm intresting my favourite is Cerebral Trauma its short and fast but before you throw uke's head up in the air could have been a bit smoother 8/10 for both.
You gotta work on flow - there's a lot of stopping and startng and places where you seem a bit scrunched up. Try to keep your body moving the whole time.
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'm just sad that I can't give myself one
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'd have a great time