Ray, you might want to turn the dickness down a bit. Just sayin'.
Anyways for the replay itself, it was nothing spectacular, but not bad either, though i'm not keen on grab hits myself. You did a pretty good job getting momentum for the strike, though the mentioned grab hit drags it down a bit. The dancing afterwards was... OK, but i usually don't care too much about what happens after the main action.
All in all, i'd say it's average, but you have potential. Keep on practicing and you'll get better.