The knight is facing to the left, but the shading on the visor is almost equal on both sides.
There's not much depth on the chain mail or collar either.

7.8/10 so far.

Cercopes and Ghiita: I covered all that in the text on the first post, but thanks anyway.

Nathan: the right side is actually much darker than the left, it should be pretty apparent.

oh ya my bad....sigh*

Meh, since you used scanlines on the chainmail for the neck, you'll have to use it everywhere else there's chainmail.
If there's too much scanlines on it, it'll definitely look weird. Maybe experiment with the "Apply Canvas" filter.
I know you have Photoshop but a lot of filters are in both GIMP and Ps, so I don't know. It's really neat.
Other than that, you're doing great so far.

I'll check it out when I get to my PC later, thanks for the suggestion.

Well, I have one concern; the knight needs to breathe, doesn't he?

Yes, I'll be adding a visor and some vents later today.

Oh, that's good.

Very good work 9/10

Update:



I need suggestions for cloth shading, anyone have ideas?