Toribash
ok, i want to tell u sth... as i see u are improving very very fast. And i'll give u few advices here.
Head is detailed so add more details to the back. U should try removing those black outlines, becuz it ruins the head (i think so, my opinion).
try detailing that metal with scratches.... it would look very cool here. i also dont like top of the head. (A is better to me) try using drop shadow. It would create a bit of 3d effect.
GJ! 8/10 for the head so far.
Also i see that detailed metal with screatches but u see real scratches are bigger and more seeable. (this is only my opinion)
Do it with style or don't even bother doing it.
if u used the bevel in other places, then B would be the better option. but theres nowhere else that it would fit, so stick with A for now.
more details tho? meh, add a plate into the bottom back area, tie things up.
ezeths latest hair tutorial in monobis disciples should help with getting the mapping onto the back right
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Better organization would be great, seems too abstract for the style your trying to go for
I'm not really feeling the left eye or if it is an eye, it's too small imo.
I do however like the result of the plates
"A study of the history of opinion is a necessary preliminary to the emancipation of the mind" - John Maynard Keynes
the plates looks nice
and you need to fix the left eye

I like textures with a story and such
keep it up
Last edited by dengue; Jun 24, 2010 at 08:15 PM.
The left eye is a normal eye but under the mask,also you can see only a part of it. There is nothing to be repaired on it.

I hadn't internet conetions for few days, but I reworked the head again
-added more details




BTW i reworked my old head.

Ill poste the progres of this head soon.
Last edited by Master2; Jun 8, 2010 at 05:33 PM.