Dude holy shit. You should get someone to look at this. I'm talking like record deal man that is fucking awesome. You are better than most rappers that I know. Your going to get into some serious money.

Can't wait to see some more. I love the bass in that video.
My cousin raps, you can find him here: http://www.myspace.com/itstupuffbitches

Wow, that's really nice :o
Unlike a lot of people who try to rap, it doesn't sound forced or anything. I'd actually take this over a lot of the hip pop going on right now.

Did you make the beat? Cuz it sounds really nice

I didn't like the second half as much though. Too broken up for me.

Here's a line for you to use.

Yo, yo, I manipulate my joints, and I smoke 'em too

Thats tight you dont jerk Well i DO

lol wow thanks guys! i will work on a toribash rap! i dont make the beats I just search for aspiring producers on Youtube and use theres. lol I knew culapuo had rhyming skills!

I don't like rap, but your style is simple(whatever that means)

if you like it, keep doing it because you seem to know how to make one interesting.

thanks so much

Squirrel the next Guicci Mane

DONT YOU EVER SAY THAT IN YOUR LIFE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOUR FAMILY!!!!

gucci is fucking brain dead