It looks...decent.

You should edit the 'Too be continued part.
Add your name on the side, add who's in it. Add some background information or narrating within the blank blue lines so it doesn't look so freaking boring.

Well, I was a bit lazy to edit them and also thanks for the +rep. I'll improve the first comic when I have some free time.

I feel bad now, read trough the whole thing without even smiling. Looks like a bunch of random rambling.

Lol, there good.
not much fighting action in it though but i still like em.

BUMP
Anymore C&C? I'll close this if they aren't anymore in 24 hours.