ALSO, the tori is non-shadered. It's IMPOSSIBLE to have a nonshadered Tori Sig that won't buy it. And the joints should be hold all, not what it looks like now. Also horrible cropping, background is pixelated, too blurry. This isn't really that good, but keep trying 0.5/10

It helps to do layers, so that there is no white lining there. Also, it would probably look better if it was hold all-ed or paused IMO.Also, the backround is a tad pixely and the beam of light streaming on top of the head text looks a bit sloppy. otherwise, good job I like the coloring. 5/10

I really liked it for your first attempt. Keep making em.

hmm i really didnt want to hold all... but ty for coments i will try to do better stuff
0.5/10? xD o goshh i have to do them better xD
i will take into account your advices
well many thanks for coments guys

Wow.

Shift in quality is HUGE.
The googling is a bit too obvious.
There's no real flow.
The tori isn't merged in at all.
I could go and point out everything that's wrong with it, but I think it's pretty clear, don't you think?

Just go on google and type in "Signature Tutorials" and follow some of those,
you'll get better in no time.
I suggest to try a smudging tutorial first.

Also, a good render is a must.. You cannot make a nice signature based on a crappy render.

lol ty for the suggestions im making a pink sig for a set ive created... so soon i will be posting it.. i did it with hold tori and no white lines lol
i will check out the tutorials some day