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I made a signature for myself to use on the PlanetRenders forum, I really like it :B



I'd love to see some pointers and critique on this piece though, I'm not that familiar with Abstract yet!

First of all, yes, it's fancy - might make a nice wallpaper. I like it.

But in fact, abstract art is more than "something random".
Colors - Composition - Impact

Color sheme.. well, parchment and ink. The brighter orange splat in the center doesn't fit that well.
Composition... eh, the wireframe-ish structure is hard to handle, I guess. It gives you ~3 directions to follow, none continues the flow. A centered focal can look strong, stable and powerful. Just as well as it can look uninteresting. Lines, text, patterns - fancy - yes, but still, to me, it neither has one of these wow-effects nor one of the hey-that-is-something-i-like-to-look-at-a-long-time-effect.
Impact - you answer this one.

You can do better, easily. Also, give it a title that makes people think, at least a bit.


Fun fact: I can be entirely wrong, its your choice to what extent this makes sense to you. I suck at art, but I do well ignoring the stuff I just told you, so you don't have to listen.


EDIT: on the sig, the text is a bit hard to read.

Thanks, I appreciate your comment, I'll take that in consideration next time.
As I said before, I did this without thoughts behind it. I just wanted to make something pleasing to the eye.
Worked on my eyes :B

Worked on my eyes too. :]

I really like this, and 80J4N is right, it looks sweet for a background.