Thats pretty Good,9/10 for that

It was overall a very stylish replay, but you made a couple tactical mistakes. Using uke's crotch for speed is great, but you used your momentum to grab ukes chest D: . You should've gotten a dm or 2 with that punch, and then kicked. The kick was great though. So was the second kick, although you were a little floaty between them. Also your little tap steps for the decap weren't exactly glamorous. The pose was kind of eh, but you already said that.

Overall, good style and flow, except for the parts mentioned.

Thanks larfen.
I Took that info about not wasting your momentum on grabs and i managed to get through on this replay.
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