Well, Christiel, I see that you're a beginner, and you're starting to learn different types of moves. :] Your replays are good for a beginner. I suggest finding your own openers and planning replays like putting in a kick or a punch. All i have to say is practice, practice, and practice. :]
Did you have skill when YOU joined toribash?
It is ok that his replay wasn't good but you can't expect a beginner to be hampa, do you?
The replay was good for a beginner. keep it up and you will become good.