Originally Posted by tajuddin47
im loving this track idk what it is but im just loving this bro
one thing i'll like to mention is....kindof what the guy said the beat sounds like a 70-80 ish type of tempo and the lyrics are a tad bit faster so even though the lyrics are synch certain parts of it isn't synch like the lyrics in certain areas would get faster then the beat would so the best way to fix that would be to chop your lyrics up into small sections and station them to be synch all the way through the song =]......oh and try mastering your beat to like not rise over the lyrics so much because when pplz play it on better and bigger speakers it will have CRAZY static so master master master! =]...and what that guy meant was that when you listen to this track you can tell that that beat didnt go with that song originally and when you do remixes the whole aim is to try and make the beat fit in perfectly with every aspect of the song so that when ppl listen to it the beat would sound like the original beat you know?.....but all you need to do to fix that is master every sound with some compression on every sound including the lyrics.....raise the lyrics a bit also.....and lower that main like hard saw that you have in therelike 10 volumes it takes away from the other sounds.......and what he means by loops is that the beat sounds the same in every verse and chorus even the drum pattern is the same throughout the whole song basically mix your verse and chorus and drops up alot in every verse and chorus so it doesn't sound repetitive and like one huge loop you know
but over all this track has potential just small tweaks here and there and it would be a great remix =] 7/10
^ Best Cnc in a while. Thanks taj, and i will most def work on my mastering more.
Though i do compress everything but i tried to make my drop as loud as possible without peaking it which is not easy :P
Thanks for the cnc and good to see you!
Originally Posted by BenDover
starts off with slowish lyrics
and beyond fast bass
then
slow bass.
fast lyrics.
even if it did keep to the count, my foot had no idea what beat to tap to
this kind of song wouldnt have been my first choice
would have much rather gone with a slower one.
slow can be sped up to match the pace, but fast songs dont really have that flexibility.
and the whine build up over the lyrics seemed a bit pointless, vocal tempo stayed the same, but you were building up the whine(not sure if you get what i mean by whine :S)
but the bass from 0:50 - 1:30 and 2:15 - 2:25 was riDONculous :o
heavy jams, ignite is still your boss song
More good cnc :O
Yeah, this song i was kind of thinking of another, so thats why that whining sound was there.
Thanks for the cnc, will most def work on those things you guys brought up o7
And thanks to whom ever else commented on my song.
I don't have any bloody idea how you do this, but sure as shit i do like the way you do it!
I don't know much about remixing and so on, but it could use a stronger bass, and a bit less of those "8 bit effects", i don't know how to call those, but i guess you understand what i mean.
That's all i can say, but keep up the good work.
Also, the "8-bit dreams" is still my favourite by you!
I don't know much about remixing and so on, but it could use a stronger bass, and a bit less of those "8 bit effects", i don't know how to call those, but i guess you understand what i mean.
That's all i can say, but keep up the good work.
Also, the "8-bit dreams" is still my favourite by you!
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It sounds good, but then when the song finishes I wonder how did you make the music fit the lyrics and the whole song itself...
You did a great job on it, though I don't think what you did SHOULD match the song, you made it work, and I think it sounded pretty good. Some of the snare drum type sounds you put were in an area where they shouldn't be placed, but the song still sounded good.
Good job!
You did a great job on it, though I don't think what you did SHOULD match the song, you made it work, and I think it sounded pretty good. Some of the snare drum type sounds you put were in an area where they shouldn't be placed, but the song still sounded good.
Good job!
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