This was a pretty good video. I was liking the first minute of it, with just the few scanlines and such.
But once it got to the second minute, there were wayyy too many effects imo.
For one replay keep it thte same shader/colour, and maybe add one effect if there is a big boom or something, and sync it with the music.
And the camera was a bit frantic at times, it almost moved too much.
But keep going, your videos are looking pretty good so far, and you can only get better.