Toribash
It was okay. 7/10, because you controlled uke. You've done that TWICE so far, and it's very unappreciated.
previously known as Lopsin
Thanks,
I did another one.
In this one, I think i was more fluid and I didn't control uke.
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Skeet-2.rpl (98.7 KB, 30 views)
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Hey, these replays are quite nice for somebody who just got into replay making.
But i guess you'd be more interested in some constructive comments rather than a boring "that's nice!", so i'll give it a try even tho i suck at this :S
First of all you're a bit twitchy at some moments in your replays, secondly you keep your arms and knees fully extended or contracted a bit too much, try to use more relax and hold instead of contracting and extending joints to make your moves more smooth and fluent. Try not to overuse relax as well tho, most replay makers do that mistake when they're just starting to make replays.
Other than that i guess everything else comes mostly with practice so keep making replays, etc etc :o
Basically what leyz said ^


For your last replay, don't make random unecessary movement. The skeetcap itself was pretty good, but a skeecap musn't be the only thing in an entire replay, it's more of a bonus. Other than this, try to be more relaxed and stylish and make a better pose ^^
Thanks for the tips and comments guys!
Did two more replays.
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Living on a prayer..rpl (220.5 KB, 29 views)
random headkick.rpl (79.7 KB, 20 views)
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Awww, no CnC...
anyway, new replay!
My first real try at tricking.
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Tricking try-1 .rpl (46.3 KB, 15 views)
Last edited by Slash; Oct 20, 2011 at 09:45 AM.
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