I'll comment on the backflip and hands one:

During the flips you look terribly stiff, try to be more relaxed and have more flow in mid air. Nothing too special here, but I did love the last flip and the landing made before the frame limit.

Yah I know that I get stiff, but I don't know how to get velocity with out raise arms.....
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some thing I did
pls rate THIS WAY: exemple: first flip it quite good 8/10, second u can make it better 7/10.
Okay?

Who said anything about not raising your arms? I was talking about during the flip, that you are very stiff.

The first flip wasn't as stiff as before I think, but it's still stiff nevertheless. The handspring is ok, but the last flip should be reworked entirely.

Okay, thanks Zal! working on it....
first edit:
EDIT: oh lol... I put handsprong...

pls don't spam my thread.
Thanks.
PLease, coment on my last replay.... and on this one

I don't like the extended ab at the opener and that twitching with the left leg ;u

The boom was stiff, but if you were to make it more relaxed it would look great. The 2dm hit wasn't spectacular, but it was decent and I liked the pose. But overall, you were kind of stiff and didn't have much stylish movement.

Okay, I will try to do more replays, but in the moment I didn't have a Idea for a oppener. Trying. post on the other one pls, the last of the page 2.
my best madman till now.

bump

second hit was nice
but mostly you were stiff in this
but most the hits look good
ok on pose
dont know a rating

bump
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new one.
CnC!