I wouldn't bother saying the song was already used.I just said it didn't I?When freecamming a spar replay try not to move the camera to the first guy and after a few seconds to the other guy.Just zoom out until you get a good point of view of what is happening.I suggest fixing the resolution by going to Pan/Crop and disable maintain aspect ratio and don't use the tv effect as it naturally is.Try to disable the grid and the blue-ish color,it ruins everything.
I won't rate your video since that's way to overrated.Just improve on what is stated in my comment and the others above.