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Add some depth inside of the mouth I think that it is done

a nose done

bottom teeth are pretty uneven i hope that it is fixed

add those eyebrows done


Originally Posted by Praeter View Post
No, he doesn't mean the grey part, he means change the skin skin colour, obviously. Monkeys aren't green.

I'm not color blind and i cant see any green here

Originally Posted by Craved View Post
And the tongue is turned, I'm pretty sure that most tongues are straight.
Hope to see more progress and finally the finished product.

Good luck!

tongue is good i think... But rest are better now?

Thanks for helping me, i hope that u wont stop comment it

Originally Posted by francistomas View Post
Really Very nice picture art..... Its look like an original photo...

Keep it up..try to participate in the competition.....Definitely you can win the price...

All the best for your bright ART future....

Heh, thank you for the compliment
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oh and i think that it wont be monkey, i will do monster or sth ;d
Last edited by Wojtek120; Nov 23, 2011 at 05:44 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Getting better, and add some shadows inside of the mouth behind the teeth for more depth. And praeter meant that the skin is orange/grey ( it does look green at first glance), also the skin looks glossy and it usually a dark pink I would guess, look up some reference pics.
Hope to see the finished product!
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add some shadows inside of the mouth behind the teeth done

i wont change skin colour

what do u think now?
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also try to put it on uke
Last edited by Wojtek120; Nov 24, 2011 at 06:20 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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what is wrong with coloring?


also thanks for comments but any constructive advice?
Maybe tell me what should I change to get better mark in your opinion...
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Originally Posted by Craved View Post
And the tongue is turned, I'm pretty sure that most tongues are straight.
Hope to see more progress and finally the finished product.

Good luck!

Tongues aren't always straight you know. If you're going to give him instructive criticism, make sure you know what you're talking about.

As for the image, I think it looks really great and the colour is spot on. Just shade the mouth a little... That's all and good luck.
Last edited by MintCat; Nov 27, 2011 at 03:25 PM.
looks really kinda like my avatar ... but somtimes weird stuff happens :P

maybe a bit more shading to the head and it looks perfect
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Originally Posted by MintCat View Post
Tongues aren't always straight you know. If you're going to give him instructive criticism, make sure you know what you're talking about.

As for the image, I think it looks really great and the colour is spot on. Just shade the mouth a little... That's all and good luck.

mouth? i was thinking that it is good now... i will try to fix it, thanks for advice and comment ;)

Originally Posted by Mike2k5 View Post
looks really kinda like my avatar ... but somtimes weird stuff happens :P

maybe a bit more shading to the head and it looks perfect

look on first post ;3
and thx
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