HTOTM: FUSION
Originally Posted by keoni109 View Post
You should add more details to the jack o lantern legs. They stand out too much because they look too clean. Add some scratches or something. The rest is outstanding. Great work.

They already have lots of scratches on them, DL and LP me if you want a closer look. But I am considering changing the colour of the eyes and mouth of the glowing faces.
Last edited by TomPaine; Dec 28, 2011 at 03:10 PM.
Update:
Have finished making the head. Changed the colour of the right eye, added glow effect, and cleaned up the entire head allot.


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Preview Below:
Originally Posted by justinlol View Post
There is something about the hair that makes the head seem incredibly weird to me.

Ummm, be more specific?
What about the hair makes it 'wierd' and what do you mean by 'wierd' exactly? :/

Originally Posted by Hucota7 View Post
I dislike the eyes. The rest looks ok.
7/10

What's not to like about the eyes? :0 ... And 7/10? What an insult -.-
Could you make the hair(even just a little) go on top of his forehead?
Jaw is Epic, I don't like the left eye though(it's smaller than the right and it looks weird) Could'ya try to make it a normal eye? Even just a pure black on that has gloss, plus the noses shape, its like crooked going down, the shaft of the nose.
Other than that,I kinda like the way you doing it, I like how you added the jaw contraption It'll look awesome with the set. but it seems sorta imcomplete, like the jaw isn't enough to keep it in the set, if you get what I mean.
The legs are nice, I like em.
Btw, the leg with the glow though, to make it look better I suggest making the mouth smaller so that the beam ain't too big, or make it like black and red beam. like its a fading red.
I do not understand the torso(body) area though, it's too repetitive and idk how to describe it.
It would look real EPIC though if the torso area wasn't just brown stuff. add some of your awesome metal to it.
Last edited by Katsudon; Dec 27, 2011 at 09:22 AM.
Hi.
Isn't that mouth metal piece a texture from WoW ?
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Looks like tier 1 Warrior head! I loved this one.
The nose looks weird please fix it, it destroys everything!
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Originally Posted by Katsudon View Post
Could you make the hair(even just a little) go on top of his forehead?
Jaw is Epic, I don't like the left eye though(it's smaller than the right and it looks weird) Could'ya try to make it a normal eye? Even just a pure black on that has gloss, plus the noses shape, its like crooked going down, the shaft of the nose.
Other than that,I kinda like the way you doing it, I like how you added the jaw contraption It'll look awesome with the set. but it seems sorta imcomplete, like the jaw isn't enough to keep it in the set, if you get what I mean.
The legs are nice, I like em.
Btw, the leg with the glow though, to make it look better I suggest making the mouth smaller so that the beam ain't too big, or make it like black and red beam. like its a fading red.
I do not understand the torso(body) area though, it's too repetitive and idk how to describe it.
It would look real EPIC though if the torso area wasn't just brown stuff. add some of your awesome metal to it.

The hair, I'm not too keen on the idea of adding hair to the middle of the forehead, since the whole idea is that his hair is pulled to the sides and hair in the middle would ruin that look. (Already tried it).

Hmm, yeah the left eye is actually pretty much the same size as the right eye, but I guess the glowing effect just makes it look bigger than what it actually is, I guess I can remove the white from the left eye and that will make both eyes looks the same size. Although at the moment both eyes look good in-game, and I guess the in-game view is all that REALLY matters.. easy fix

The nose IS a bit crooked going down, but take a look at most people's noses and you will find no one has a perfectly straight nose. In order to have perfection, you must first have imperfection.

I like your thoughts with the legs. I have been changing them around allot in an attempt to make them look more fitting towards the set. It's kinda getting annoying haha.

And IGNORE to torso area, I was just experimenting with a few things, I AM adding metal to it and changing around the textures. It will NOT look like that in the final product.


Thanks for the in depth response!
Originally Posted by Freelancer View Post
Isn't that mouth metal piece a texture from WoW ?

The idea for the set came from 'World of Warcraft: Cataclysm'. The texture is similar.
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Originally Posted by Chreeys View Post
Looks like tier 1 Warrior head! I loved this one.
The nose looks weird please fix it, it destroys everything!


^Love T1 warrior :3 .. I had no intentions of making my head texture look like t1 warrior :P .. hmm, would be a nice idea to make that for my next set!


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I've been hearing allot of criticism on the nose.. I guess it's too thick and needs work. Might go experiment or even make a new nose now. Thanks for commenting!
Last edited by PRAdA; Dec 27, 2011 at 01:03 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Horrible, in my opinion.

The mouth metal piece looks copy/paste.

and the hair looks awful.

The eyes stand out to much and the skin is too pail.

2.10