True true. Overdoing dodge/burn is easy.

I'm not much of a painter so I can't really give legitimate feedback. However, I can say that I really like what I like. Such as the leg, parts around the eye, and magenta/green highlights. The side of the belly has an odd shift in tissue midway. But, you have a pretty unique shading style so that might just be my own eye.

As an aside, have you thought of posting your works at ConceptArt.org? It's a community comprised purely of painters so you'd probably get better feedback there (Better feedback than mine at least!). They got a forum like everyone else if you decide to check it out.

Also, Kero Kero.

good work look great for only 1 hour but you need to work on the positioning of the feet/ adjust the shading of the object it is on but i guess you are only an hour in so its great work.

I am at the forum already I just haven't posted anything there yet.