Presents: Overall it was really nice imo. The start looked a bit scratchy in places, but the flow to the boom looked very nice. The bit between the hits looked a bit awkward though, kinda just like you didn't really know what to do. Second hit was nice though and i love spear dives for some reason.
The only advice i can give really is see what you can do in between, either try and make them hit faster or do something :P
Manip: Other than the fact you hit your head on uke a lot i LOVE this replay. The close quarters manipulation is really cool looking, and the boom was good. Not great though :<
It lacked power, i know it was legit from the momentum and higher grav, but yeah, lacked substance imo.
Brutality: The start was really generic but then... Your flow in that was just incredible, one boovm after the next, it was fast paced, destructive, fluid. Would've liked something to deal with the upper torso, another skeet maybe? either way, great replay, maybe finished a tad prematurely though.
Begin of nice: This one was nice but eh. the hits were seriously messy and the start was pretty stoppy-starty if that makes sense? The last hit was magnificent, the other just looked messy though :s
All in all keep it up, there's some great work here, although i'd like to see what you could do in -9.89 grav