Toribash
Stuttler - For first look, looks awesome. And it is awesome. Nice opener but not so original, this single dm with hand, you probably not planning this . Next kick is great, very destructive. Transition to decap looks nice but i dont like this you grabbed while decap, however this grab is almost invisible so its not that bad at all. Last boom you made it with knee but its enough fast to looks accurate. Pose is a little odd with this raised arm and contracted elbow ;) love flow in this replay.


The ballad of a broken man - First 150 frames is just a little too slow. Then this kick.. looks like you have speed 44 in this kick and you dmed only one leg. Then Decap and two arm is all single dms and flow is a little ruined at this point. Transition to boom is soooo laxed and i like you didnt dmed while first kick. You kicked, then grabbed then boom Last dms looks a little random because you just fell in to rest of uke then boomed. Pose is very nice.

Keep it up man.
~RIP [Vector], Shikkumo's butthole
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Thanks Aadame. I couldn't wait to post these.

Also, on 'silent day', I am aware my hand ghosted horribly through my leg around 250 frames, I just made all of that in one single take and I only noticed after I was done. My great replay on this post is 'libera me from hell', even though I couldn't get any booms, keeping that manip on uke was pretty hard.
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A_ libera me from hell.rpl (254.3 KB, 22 views)
At_ silent day.rpl (124.0 KB, 19 views)
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I don't CnC 2/more replays in a time.

I'll just CnC A_libera from hell:
Mini manip was okay.
First hit was good, it was with the gravity speed.
Then you took it random.
Next hit was alright, nothing special.
This replay didn't impress me... No.
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I did never say 'libera me from hell' was a masterpiece, I said it was hard to do and it took me quite a while (yeah, I suck at manipulation), I also couldn't get the right aiming on the last kick, that's why I couldn't make any boom. Well, thanks for the CnC at least, I'll take the advice and not do manipulation again.
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No no, stay trying manipulations. They are enjoyable and pretty cool in replays, just practicing is the best.
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Hi.
Well, manip was alright, looked stiff a bit.
The punch was clear and looked pretty clean.
then it looked a bit random. But he kick was very strong, you should ghosted your hand when kicked the glutes, it will make your kick better.
Pose could be done better?

Pretty good replay I would say.
"People become stronger cause there are memories they won't forget."
A_ Libera from hell: Was very stiff in most parts of the replay, the booms were nice placed also the grabs so you dont loose uke/your balance. I mostly liked the flow on this one. Well done 7.6/10

At_ silent day: I liked the first backflip it looked like the one what pro freerunners usualy do to make it look better. And it worked it looked very nice. The second jump was very stiff and didnt look good. It was that you simply took swing by one leg and landed on the other like all the tricking beginners do to make a backflip. The cork was very well i liked the flow in that one. 7,9/10

Keep practicing, you are good but there is more to go!
Taking the advice from patrickooo, I kept on trying manip (sort of).
and this is what I got, again, I couldn't get the aiming for any booms, but this one looks pretty stylish IMO.
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A_Daydreamear.rpl (171.7 KB, 24 views)
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The opener was alright, didn't like the way it looked when your fist hit the ground. Manip was alright, not too sloppy, but you grabbed right after. Grabbing + manip is a bad combination (unless if there's a skeet, of course or you've managed to make it look stylish). The first hit could've gotten a boom if you aim it correctly. I'm not too fond of the second kick. It seemed week, and your foot just brushed off uke's ass. Last hit was okay. I loved the transition between the punch and the pose. Good flow.
yeah ok