HTOTM: FUSION
Originally Posted by AlphasoniK View Post
Obviously you do not know how I made this.
But thanks for jumping to the conclusion and making yourself look stupid.

When you post your art, you're going to get criticism. Rather than respond negatively to it, why not, instead, try and explain your art, and how it expresses what you're trying to convey?

That aside, I love '002v01'. I don't feel calm or curious looking at it, but it's visually appealing for some reason. Kudos.

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Hey, I got pretty much inspired by your work so I thought I could do something myself. It may be plagiarism (I don't know), but wanted to see your opinion on it...
Last edited by Sluup; Apr 15, 2013 at 08:37 PM.
That's terrible. It's messy and the colors makes my eyes bleed. The mosaik filter doesn't make sense.
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All right, well, I pretty much messed up so there's...no other way than to walk back away in shame, sorry for posting this...
(Well I'd better stick to rendering then)
Last edited by Sluup; Apr 15, 2013 at 08:39 PM.
Go get better before sharing with the world, is a good tip.
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Originally Posted by Ele View Post
When you post your art, you're going to get criticism. Rather than respond negatively to it, why not, instead, try and explain your art, and how it expresses what you're trying to convey?

That aside, I love '002v01'. I don't feel calm or curious looking at it, but it's visually appealing for some reason. Kudos.

If he would've posted criticism I would've responded in an orderly fashion.
I'm used to taking criticism and even critique, his just didn't make sense and that is not something I respect.

Thank you for your post, I'm glad you feel that way!

Originally Posted by Oopyuman View Post

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Hey, I got pretty much inspired by your work so I thought I could do something myself. It may be plagiarism (I don't know), but wanted to see your opinion on it...

I'm glad you got inspired!
However, you piece seems a bit rushed.
I think long about where I want to place my lines and I make sure they are all placed either symmetrically or "smart". Abstract art (for me) is not something you can rush.
You should work on your focus, colour choice and placement of lines.

If you're interested in this kind of work, try to start as simple as possible.
Too many details only ruin the piece.

I'll make another one tomorrow.
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003v01:
In a compositional aspect, this piece has a lot going for it. The use of vector lines to draw attention to the center is subtle yet affective.

After gazing into the center for awhile, the black around the white started to create almost a pale white skin color. Which led me to think of two people holding hands.

So whether this was intentionally done or not, the triangles at first drew my attention to the black dot which then forced me to see it as two people holding hands.

I don't look at much concept art but this is very well done. Nice work.

It is a pity that there is not much abstract art on this forum, but I'm glad that at least some people are doing it. Can you tell me what is your main initiator when you're doing abstract? What do you seek to transfer on the eyes of the beholder?

I see you are going toward simplicity and geometry, while I pursued the rawness of colors, volumes and brush strokes.

You encouraged me to post some of my work at least. I really would appreciate some comments.
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