Not too bad, movement wasn't entirely realistic though.
A couple movement issues I didn't like, there were times when it seemed like tori/uke moved a bit too slow. Could've sped it up there. A couple of arm and leg twitches here and there :c
Overall though, movement was decent, the actual attacks could've been executed better. More fluidity, since sometimes the movement was rather jerkey.
I like the general concept you had going though, even if it is rather over-done.
Pls do better, it pains me to see you do bad.

let me try again then

Pretty much the same thing as beforeee.
Nice concepts and ideas and hits and whatnot.
Movement was still stiff on some parts, better then before though.
And, you sort of stopped moving at some points before continuing on, I have never liked that in a spar. It sort of went on and off. Sometimes your movements were fluid, but at other times they were rather jerky.
Improvement is there though, keep working on it tho.

thanks.
tried tricking.

The b twist and the cork looked way too rushed. Looked like you just wanted to get the tricks over with without proper momentum or style. I didn't like the hand touch on the ground very much when you combo'd the tricks but pretty good job, you got good twist. Just need to work on your momentum so that you aren't rushing into your tricks and having troubles getting into another trick.

thanks.

made a new one, shorter but smoother.

I thought that the opener was going to be generic, but the fact that you had that extended ankle and didn't go into a sweep of some sorts was p nice.
The twist was nice, although I feel as if you could've gotten more spin. As well, your hip twitched at one point D:
The transition into the gainer was so basic, but at least you did it well. It's the doughnut cork that amazes me. I 100% expected you to cork from the gainer, since that's what you do, but that sideways doughnut boy was cool.
Should've done something more creative for the pose, the really over-done symmetrical standing pose feels out of place considering the different stuff you tried.
A couple of knee and hip twitches here and there, but for the most part it was really good.

thanks.

Pretty sick movement
Opener was typical but the spin out of it was better.
Split was decent, but the spin into the boom was really fucking good. The boom itself felt a bit weird.
Transition to the pose was good as well.
Overall great stuff m8.

whats up?