So I was messing around and got this. Let me know what you think of it.

Again, here's a little something.

cnc pls

Feces on my Toes: The opener is stiff and simplistic, but I kind of like the trajectory of the kick. Pulling uke back with your leg looks pretty stiff again with the knee extended all the way. The punch was pretty natural-looking.

Thank you.

I'm really bad with openers.

Here's another replay I got messing around. CnC pls

Bump. cnc plsplsplspls

#Soap - Feces on my toes.rplguise pls

I worked on "Feces on my toes" a bit
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Actually I messed with it again and managed to get another DM

I actually edited again.. Changed it a bit.

Let me know which one looks better/what I should change about whichever one.

pls

new replayyyyyyy

The entire replay is rather stiff, the head kick is neat but should have been more or less left at that, the skeet was thrown at a really awkward angle also. Try to take a deep breath and relax it should helo out cuz it was stiff get it? im so smrt



But realy keep working at it you will get there

Oh yeah the head kick was really coool tho