well,i must say that the opener only started cool,but ended not the way that wold be cool to be.
like,you lost speed and changed the direction of the spin.
the punch wold make 2 dms i guess(pec and sholder)
the kick was useless :/
but the next one was ok i guess,i just dislike the way you used the kicks,like,wold be better if you was standing to make the kick,the pose you kicked was strange
the kick was good,2 dms,but again,wold make 4 dms possible
the other kick was stiff on the part of the body...also,the glute dm was simple,get speed on it,make ghosting to make it look epic,again,more dms was possible
that last skeet was nice,so bad you moved uke's neck :/
just enable damage 1 to make self dms possible,and use a really high speed to it
work on movements,flow(transition to the next movement),speed and the dms
like,you lost speed and changed the direction of the spin.
the punch wold make 2 dms i guess(pec and sholder)
the kick was useless :/
but the next one was ok i guess,i just dislike the way you used the kicks,like,wold be better if you was standing to make the kick,the pose you kicked was strange
the kick was good,2 dms,but again,wold make 4 dms possible
the other kick was stiff on the part of the body...also,the glute dm was simple,get speed on it,make ghosting to make it look epic,again,more dms was possible
that last skeet was nice,so bad you moved uke's neck :/
just enable damage 1 to make self dms possible,and use a really high speed to it
work on movements,flow(transition to the next movement),speed and the dms
Last edited by victortb; Apr 16, 2016 at 07:32 PM.
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While you still have some amazing concepts for your replays, they get ruined by the fact that you're being very stiff.
First 2 kicks were nice and were followed up by an ok punch, it could have been more powerful and instead it just felt like it scraped uke and made a lucky dm.
Spinny flip thing was pretty cool but you looked extremely stiff during it.
Kick had a cool concept and had lots of potential but it ended up looking forced when you simply extended the leg instead of using the momentum you could have gotten from it.
You could have easily done something with the legs you threw in the air. Could have made for a sick kick to finish it up.
Good job overall but smoothen up a bit, will ya?
First 2 kicks were nice and were followed up by an ok punch, it could have been more powerful and instead it just felt like it scraped uke and made a lucky dm.
Spinny flip thing was pretty cool but you looked extremely stiff during it.
Kick had a cool concept and had lots of potential but it ended up looking forced when you simply extended the leg instead of using the momentum you could have gotten from it.
You could have easily done something with the legs you threw in the air. Could have made for a sick kick to finish it up.
Good job overall but smoothen up a bit, will ya?
Last edited by Mack; Apr 17, 2016 at 11:00 PM.
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"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
opener was kinda simple,but good at same time,flowed nice to pose on the first 2 kicks
but like mack said,you can make the looks more powerful,also,this 2nd kick wold have done an core/2 dms split,the punch was a bit "invisible",i mean,it wasnt that clean at all,but nice,the way you throwed uke's legs was a bit...strange,looked a bit stiff.
also,that decap was extremely nice.
the end pose was nice.
man,you growed up really fast,wow,that escalated quickly
from the last replay you done to it you done an huge improvement,you're on the right path
but like mack said,you can make the looks more powerful,also,this 2nd kick wold have done an core/2 dms split,the punch was a bit "invisible",i mean,it wasnt that clean at all,but nice,the way you throwed uke's legs was a bit...strange,looked a bit stiff.
also,that decap was extremely nice.
the end pose was nice.
man,you growed up really fast,wow,that escalated quickly
from the last replay you done to it you done an huge improvement,you're on the right path
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