The camera is way too close man. I'm watching the video to see some demonstrable skills, not animated 3D abstract polygons. Make it longer. Show the skills of the replay makers involved, and make them look good. The audience should have fun, not just you.
Originally Posted by
snoresville
it's so close that some details are lacking, I know you revolutionized a new type of camera movement, but don't over-exaggerate it
Please show me the date of this 'revolution'. Because I'm pretty sure I went balls out on the freecam back in like 2010. By balls out, I mean bugged the living shit out of Fnugget to hurry up and finish coding the damn thing so my hyperactive arse could put it to use.
Honestly, you young'uns...
A last nugget of advice. NO-ONE is impressed by a video you admit took 45 minutes to make. Even less so if the video itself has about 20 seconds of content and consists of studio filter overload.
If you want praise, put some serious effort into it. If you want fame, be a good sport about criticism. TAKE ADVICE. Don't assume you know best when the public opinion is clearly not on your side. Learn from mistakes and try not to make them in the future.
Do a video for the whole song, be creative with the timing, the transitions and the music. Lastly, make videos for your own enjoyment, don't do commissions for god's sake.