Nice video after 9 years of development (I actually think you spent 3 days)
The sync is nice and the music is good (because it's trap music)
And I liked how you used a bit of effects to sync with the music as well


But


When you sync your stuff together, it may sound well and goes with the beat, but it could get messy, somewhere in the video, when certain hits are close together based in time and the music can't be synced like that, you make those hits soo slow that we see frame by frame before the sync is placed, and sometimes the hits are too far away based in time, so you fast forward to the point where that guy is faster than sonic or a blink with weed.

dont try to sync every hit

3D tracking, roto


3D tracking, particle system, flares


3D tracking, particle system, roto










thats not a transparent texture set with white lines

even if i did do that, its not original enough and im clearly copying the god that is slycooper!!!!
and i was thinking of ur last video in particular and the one with that rl grime song idk that was off the top of my head

hi. great job with the video, but i too myself can't say that you've improved.

i think what dscigs and sly are trying to say rather aggressively is that your videos are great, you really can edit, it's just that you are applying the exact same concept to each of your videos. i would love to say that you have improved, but by doing the same thing each time you edit isnt going to get you anywhere. to me, the fun behind editing is learning and experiencing different styles by being adventurous, not sticking within your comfort zone and just denying other cnc that people are giving you. i hope you see it the same way as well.

an excellent example of this would be sly, as he goes out of his way to try different styles of editing and continually works hard to produce interesting content that will keep his subscribers hooked onto his channel. yes, each video of his does have the same concept applied to it, but it's the small tweaks like switching up the mood, or maybe even trying different effects. these small things can make large impacts to the video.

i like the fact that you did try something different with the slow-mo thingo you had going at the beginning of the vid, and the sound overlays that you added in vegas, however it is important that you do pay attention to the feedback that you're receiving from your peers. the comments that dscigs made about the sound effects doing too loud and the screen pumps being so intense that it detracts from the video are excellent points, and i think you really should consider them before shaking them off.

now to my cnc: like i mentioned above, i like the fact that you've added sounds and tried something different, but you have indeed made them a touch too loud. screenpumps were also too intense, maybe you should do your pan/crop in ae c: i can teach you the basics if you'd like.

just remember: don't brush things off so easily. take notice of each and every comment, and even though that they might sound like an ass, take in the good points and apply them to your next video

sorry for the wall of text C: good luck!

dscigs pm'd tyzi telling her that she was retarded and needed to learn to use sv. so, sly is saying that she doesn't change but she should which is fine. but dscigs is just doing it out of spite, which is probably the reason she brushes comments from him off.

i might look like a bit of a gronk saying this but yea its true

Awesome video. Loved the effects and the replays.

Very nice work Tyzi.

The only reason I'm pissed is because I tell her the same thing on every video she posts, and so do a lot of people but rather she just ignores everyone instead of trying to improve.
And then she doesn't understand that people have different opinions from her and maybe they're actually trying to help, she goes ahead and insults everyone.


I'm done here, if Tyzi doesn't want to take comments from other people, I'm not going to help, everyone has a different style, Tyzi simply doesn't understand that.
Also, in regards to your childish show of my incomplete video to prove that im somehow bad, if you forget it's a wip, which means it's not done Tyzi.

if i dont listen the first time its because i dont WANT to listen to what you have to say
i read it, and if you actually put forth the effort to helping me and explaining things, then i'll most likely listen

for example, avi doesn't like my panning, wow! hes said it every time i send him my edits.
this time, he's offered to HELP me by showing me how to use ae and pan in it, because the sv pan/crop isn't NEARLY as good

[6:47:05 AM] humper: also, dont mind dscigs
[6:47:12 AM] humper: he's just salty that I always trash talk his videos

[12:51:01 AM] Iso: cause hes bad and cant get anything done
[12:51:24 AM] Iso: he keeps scrapping edits because theyre not "original" or "different"

idk man

rely cool vidio

song transition at the start (or w/e that is) sounds a bit weird, screen pumps are iffy but that's because svp pan/crop is kind of shit and hard to make look good, cc fits nice but i dont like horizon/moon shaders (personal feeling), sync was nice, spar at end was col, not a big fan of the hit sounds (the blunt impact sounds are okay but the cracks are gross), transitions looked ok

i dont wanna hear any of you complain about sv's pancrop
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