Originally Posted by protonitron

Anyone can come up with one or two rhymes with adverbs,
But you can't seem to have fun without repeating your words.
May I make a plea that you stop subjecting me to read nouns used adjectively,
Admittedly you can probably see that the rhyme on the previousness line was ironically was an aforementioned use of an adverb but at least I don't descend into bars which lend themselves to idiocy.
And HLnaster nobody would call your rymes crime, contrary to how you see yourself your far from divine, all you are doing is wasting your time, which is fine. Now I'm going to hope you can cope with these ropes of mine. Your use of words is so poor you should just head for you door before you abuse this opportunity any more.

This is my first attempt at any rapping and most of my contempt in this post was just acting so I hope we can be content to view each other as brothers in this event since we are all equally bad (there was no rymes in these last couple of words and for that I am truly not regretful since this thread is retarded).

Originally Posted by T0ribush

There is no way you can compete trying to use my words against me.
I'm awake and already baked chewing out wannabe fakes with a rap
So stacked I'm ready for a verbal war with my lyrical ensemble score
Like music I'm striking notes and chords in harmony with a flow
Too steady delivering blows too deadly to those who think they know
A shove from me is enough to show your half assed words who's uncle

Originally Posted by protonitron

The thing with ryming "ing"s is that you can sing any verb in eng-lish language. I don't want to be held hostage to you stupidity which you're spilling on me.

I'm not gunna bother to write any more on ya (meaning your) thread for a while since it actually getting quite late and I need to go to bed.

And yes; the last bit was ironic.

Originally Posted by protonitron

Anyone can come up with one or two rhymes with adverbs,
But you can't seem to have fun without repeating your words.
May I make a plea that you stop subjecting me to read nouns used adjectively,
Admittedly you can probably see that the rhyme on the previousness line was ironically was an aforementioned use of an adverb but at least I don't descend into bars which lend themselves to idiocy.
And HLnaster nobody would call your rymes crime, contrary to how you see yourself your far from divine, all you are doing is wasting your time, which is fine. Now I'm going to hope you can cope with these ropes of mine. Your use of words is so poor you should just head for you door before you abuse this opportunity any more.

This is my first attempt at any rapping and most of my contempt in this post was just acting so I hope we can be content to view each other as brothers in this event since we are all equally bad (there was no rymes in these last couple of words and for that I am truly not regretful since this thread is retarded).

Originally Posted by protonitron

I have an idea! We could start alternating lines to make a group rap!

Please edit the thread description so this is a thing. We will have to do some sort of linking rhyme with the line posted by the last person. After a while it can be posted together as only terrible and disgusting rap.

And sorry for offending you

Originally Posted by protonitron

Anyone can come up with one or two rhymes with adverbs,
But you can't seem to have fun without repeating your words.
May I make a plea that you stop subjecting me to read nouns used adjectively,
Admittedly you can probably see that the rhyme on the previousness line was ironically was an aforementioned use of an adverb but at least I don't descend into bars which lend themselves to idiocy.
And HLnaster nobody would call your rymes crime, contrary to how you see yourself your far from divine, all you are doing is wasting your time, which is fine. Now I'm going to hope you can cope with these ropes of mine. Your use of words is so poor you should just head for you door before you abuse this opportunity any more.

This is my first attempt at any rapping and most of my contempt in this post was just acting so I hope we can be content to view each other as brothers in this event since we are all equally bad (there was no rymes in these last couple of words and for that I am truly not regretful since this thread is retarded).

Originally Posted by Hlmaster

What the fuck, who the fuck?
Says my name wrong at the start... you might be out of luck.
Prepare to get hammered by a truck, because that's what I'm doing rolling over your college rhymes that suck.
Kid, don't come gramatically over a fight that messes up your reality or else it's a fatality to have your presence in this, truly tragically, encounter of two minds developing duality. BRU-TA-LI-TY!
Stick your sentences over your own self, don't blame sins over someone else, nobody is godly and never ever will be, but fuck it, I'm bold staring at your face, wannabe. You see? I don't mean to offend, but if it's a rhyme battle, I must attend, especially since even your face doesn't blend, this is a rap battle thread, not a school where idiots learn how things can be read.
That said, I'd like to say you're kind of good for your first time, but please, don't try to pick the hamster into a rhyme fight.
bye ♥