alroit time 2 cnc
ok so i don't wanna bash you on the quality because it's gonna be brought up by many other people anyway so yeah the quality is egh
the vocalist (or any vocalist who wanna b part of the band n shit) needs to be comfortable with being loud and all "AUSIDJIUDIHFIUHA" and shit because the og song has more emotion and volume making the actual point and lyrics present.
i like the guitar, but is that the only instrument you have atm? a nice bass guitar and some drums won't kill, but then again money issues amirite ( no worries i am poor don't think i'm trying to insult you )
aaaand besides that i don't like the ending that much, it's very unnecessary and although you're trying to put your own twist into it, it doesn't really fit.
and yeah that's it, i'll give 7.8/10 cus it's a type of rock i'd like to see more of