Okay, the advice you've given me has actually helped me a lot for my current madman.
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Here's a new replay guys!
As most of you know, I was unhappy with "Suicide Note" so I made a new one using the same plan presented here.
This replay stays in the realism genre and the hits make sense.
CnC appreciated!
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Another replay! Parkour this time, I realize I'm very stiff, I'm going to rework the replay later and go to bed now (yawn)... I'm probably stiff because I'm tired..
CnC appreciated.

Well since datchilled_satorini.tbm won't load I can't CnC that so I'll do Bright spirit

I couldn't really find many things since it was for a challenge so

The Yes:
-Cool opener
-Nice DMs for the most part, some weren't perfect
-You stayed on your feet which some people don't do for some reason
-Cool boomhit c;

The (min)No(r):
-Your feet wasn't completely on the ground in the pose :CCCC
-At the start you regrabbed your hand on Uke's shoulder and it looked quite awkward
-Random frontflip :/
-Get a set

Yeah idk why it didn't load, anyways thanks for the cnc,
the frontflip was so I could pose, the shoulder thing was an accident oops, fuck you for the set thing, I just bought one and I'm going to buy one from calamity, the one I just bought the guy refuses to send stuff properly.

1. I'm definitely gonna lose the challenge.

2. you're a fucking parkour god.

1. It depends on they're preferred style.

2. Maybe :P

I, xlr84life, bare witness that Rune is an upcoming toribash parkour star.

Signed
xlr

Lol thanks man, just gotta keep working x| Sorry, I have to put this is my signature, it'll remind me to work harder and achieve my goals.
I'm hoping it'll happen though, I love parkour. It's my toribash life.

Any advice though?

I'll give some detailed cnc when I find time ;)

For now I can say that I noticed a lot of stiffness.

Very true, it's one of my sore points that I work on the most, also the twitchiness in my arms.
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Okay so this is now my 3rd replay for the surgical toribash event, I hate myself so much, it took forever :/

problem for 1st replay (suicide note): It sucked...
problem for 2nd replay (bright spirit): It looked amazing but I held Uke therefore the gm's say it doesn't count, thanks gm's!
problem for 3rd replay (RAWR): I swear if there's a problem I'm going to kill myself...

RAWR replay below.

Damn, it was great. Moaar better than the last one.
I like how you keep your realism style and you keep your balance nicely.
Punches were great. lol so you got the boom, cool.

I hope you win this event, goodluck.