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not really a fan of any of them tbh.

the UC ones your best, no doubt. its interesting atleast.
just keep it simple and work on your pen control and spacing consistancy.
the curves are haphazard and spacings of like the outlines and the cross arent consistant with each other at all. consistancy creates unity.

try working with some more muted colours, start working with lower opacities and mess with really subtle gradients or something, your colours are very intense, and your colour combinations in some of them dont quite gel.

anything further than that, i cant help, i was never that great at logos. you'll probably have the logo makers crying about how these arent logos or something at some point.
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Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
not really a fan of any of them tbh.

the UC ones your best, no doubt. its interesting atleast.
just keep it simple and work on your pen control and spacing consistancy.
the curves are haphazard and spacings of like the outlines and the cross arent consistant with each other at all. consistancy creates unity.

try working with some more muted colours, start working with lower opacities and mess with really subtle gradients or something, your colours are very intense, and your colour combinations in some of them dont quite gel.

anything further than that, i cant help, i was never that great at logos. you'll probably have the logo makers crying about how these arent logos or something at some point.

something like that. actually the one above the mantra gaming logo is the best except for the 1 point black outline which feature is not really good in illustrator it makes it pixelly so try to forget it.

and the main logo in 3d but the fire on it is not really 3d ish

other than that if u keep practising u will getgood try working on better quality
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
not really a fan of any of them tbh.

the UC ones your best, no doubt. its interesting atleast.
just keep it simple and work on your pen control and spacing consistancy.
the curves are haphazard and spacings of like the outlines and the cross arent consistant with each other at all. consistancy creates unity.

try working with some more muted colours, start working with lower opacities and mess with really subtle gradients or something, your colours are very intense, and your colour combinations in some of them dont quite gel.

Ye I wouldn't expect you to like any of them, you know way more about this stuff than me I just try to do stuff and gradually get better as I go. I have no background doing graphical design, so knowledge about fonts and color theory is really lacking.

some website banner for my friends website making practice I am working on.

Its a restaurant website "Skien" is a place, "restauranter" is restaurants, colors was non-optional, used the colors from the website.
I'll clean it up a bit more, looks a bit flat now.

quick gaming logo
Last edited by Ezeth; May 19, 2015 at 05:50 AM.
I can honestly see thst being a ligit restaurant logo very nice work ezeth i like it
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