Originally Posted by Velair
Then you don't understand PROFESSIONAL logo concepts. He wanted something that would look good on a business card most likely, not something that would look good on the toribash banner.
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jeez dude chill i just gave my opinion, he said nothing about going on a bussines card i was expecting something like a website logo, without info i can only go for what i think it appears to be :P
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as marci provided, martin reinhard said that the letters are to close together, if you just space them a bit it think the logo is done and finnished, lets hope he choses your design
Real world logos dont have to be flashy or amazing, they just need to represent the client without being terrible.
assuming/hoping this is all vectored, would solve most of the issues i have with it.
The short R bothers me
and the middle point of the M and the R not lining up properly really strikes a nerve.
and something about the line thicknesses not being the same, but that might just be my imagination.
something is just throwing the consistancy/balance off.
and the blue could be a more neutral tone. vibrant colours put as many people off as they attract people. a lighter version of azrite comes to mind
otherwise yeah, it works.
assuming/hoping this is all vectored, would solve most of the issues i have with it.
The short R bothers me
and the middle point of the M and the R not lining up properly really strikes a nerve.
and something about the line thicknesses not being the same, but that might just be my imagination.
something is just throwing the consistancy/balance off.
and the blue could be a more neutral tone. vibrant colours put as many people off as they attract people. a lighter version of azrite comes to mind
otherwise yeah, it works.
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
-its all vectored
-its a simple color gradient used as blue to make this simple logo bump a bit
-dont get what you mean on short R
-the thickness is absolutely 100% the same everywhere on the logo cuz everything is made with the same outline and then expanded
-the nature one color tone made it boring like hell cuz i tried it but its okay if you dont like it.
-and what you mean about middle point of M and R not lining up properly? dont get what u mean they doesnt even need to line up
-its a simple color gradient used as blue to make this simple logo bump a bit
-dont get what you mean on short R
-the thickness is absolutely 100% the same everywhere on the logo cuz everything is made with the same outline and then expanded
-the nature one color tone made it boring like hell cuz i tried it but its okay if you dont like it.
-and what you mean about middle point of M and R not lining up properly? dont get what u mean they doesnt even need to line up
