psst i give up on the relaxed manip
why is that stuck in my foot
Pros:
cool opener
opener transitions perfectly to each part
hot double knee
good flow
Cons:
awkward last kick
Things you should do:
Okay, this is a really well done replay, really suits your style, spins are real great and a really nice seamless flow, not even the double knee kills it, however, the second kick was bad, it makes your tori looks like "oh look an opportunity to kick" and reaches out for it, i mean the resulting boom wasn't bad but it's just weird, also, your movements are a bit weird and pretty avant garde, but it's not a bad thing and can define your style, because with those movements you can make a solid replay like this. Good job 8.5/10