Eh, it's hard to find things to say about this video.
There really wasn't much editing to speak of, the velocity wasn't dynamic, the sync was pretty terrible (you shouldn't rely on just screenpumps, there are other ways to sync), there was no change in the video when the song changed, etc
On a more general note, if you're going to be so defensive about comments on your video, don't post your videos. We don't care about any excuses, or the fact it's a WIP. If it's posted here, people will post their opinions on what you post, that's how this board works.