HTOTM: FUSION
There's too much going on, too much clutter. Head seems a bit awkward, some small graphics look nice, other than that it's alright.
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Advens, it's not a bad set.. but it's hardly to be called "good", either. You shouldn't stop making textures, it's just, like others said, take your time. Slow down and try to compose yourself, have concrete ideas. It's okay if you only create one piece of a whole set in one day. If you're busy, just work a little bit each day, even if it takes a month to make a set at least you made it good.

Let me remind you of who you are, man.

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Wake up, brother, you're a great artist, you just need to take your time again. People used to call you "The God Advens". You've got it in you.
from what i see the second set in gbleeks post is the most awesome you ever made, that almost perfect
Your previous arts are better.
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Damn, this whole discussion is really cold, the art is dope as hell, ye it may not be your best but thanks for trying, thanks for contributing, and doing your best to boost this odd period in the art market, I like this set, and I think you should keep trying at realistic-cartoon sets like this, but I think your still better at robotic

anyway

stay awesome, advens

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I'll actually give you some cc.The fur is way too random. It should have a pattern or some layering. It just looked clusterfuckd
definitely not your best but it's also not your worst
the random cartoon additions to any set of yours turns me off, and i'll always feel that way
your style creates for some very lovely vector robots and you're great with simple shading
i'd love to see you use that in combination with your creativity to see some tribal sets instead of these shitty cartoon ones with nothing but useless "funny" faces and pictures on them

once again, i've always liked your art style, just not all of your art
please go back to where you started and compose more of that theme
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just slow down man, don't become a zwift or a bad80, cranking out art as fast as they can just so they can make tc (no offense).
Set looks unfinished (uncolored and looks choppy)

just slow down
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this set didnt really teach you anything you didnt already know.

i like the pen work on the fur, its almost tribal, nice varied thicknesses, curves and sharp angles and points.
i agree with marcis statement that you cant find yourself.
honestly, id suggest you look into moving from the cartoon stuff to tribalising real stuff. find a nice blend of the two.
figurative tribals, like some of my older works.
if anything, trying something new would give you a new perspective. if it doesnt work out, you atleast learned something.

Originally Posted by Marci6 View Post
from what i see the second set in gbleeks post is the most awesome you ever made, that almost perfect

i agree that its his best in terms of technique, but its a pretty generic style and quite far from what it looks like he wants to do.
the body textures from no.5 are by far my favorite

Originally Posted by Kyuri View Post
just slow down man, don't become a zwift or a bad80, cranking out art as fast as they can just so they can make tc (no offense).
Set looks unfinished (uncolored and looks choppy)

just slow down

Originally Posted by Marci6 View Post
it doesnt work that way.....

u makin like 2 texture sets per day

while it should be like 1/week

I was cracking out one or two sets a night when i was prowling the market, it really takes alot out of you. taking your time and picking and choosing what you want to do, goes a long way towards improving and solidifying your style.
Last edited by BenDover; Nov 16, 2015 at 08:43 AM.
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