I think the jump cuts were a bit......ott. I would have maybe also used a variety of fps (high and slowmo). The repeats were't as good as I thought but I would love to see it re-vamped and finished!

pretty bad imo. jumpcuts are shoddy, stevo would be fucking disappointed smh

smh imo omg wasn't choppy enough
smh imo/10

But really
I didn't enjoy one bit of it, too much jumpcuts for my taste fam.

i cant watch this again pls remake it. i mean come on you make much better vids.

I think the jumpcuts were alright, it's just the repeats that screwed it up

I do like the tiny bit after the parkour with the tracked text though, I think it was cool

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I liked it, yes the glitch thing was weird but it worked sort of. Try to improve though

New wip

oh yeah thats much better but i think moving the cam a bit in the white shader or whatever it is would be bit better.

The weird thing is that I didn't changed anything from the first wip.