It does seem you know what to improve on, so do so next time

Lmao wtf, that guy who commented about my music taste clearly cant read. I tried many new things, most people just didnt notice cause they were either thinking about how shitty my camerawork is or how they dont like the music

lmao, i don't understand people who post in this forum and don't actually want cnc?

improve.
stop being boring.

i agree with uhm/nani.

i like the video

i think what did the most harm was the lack of effects that brought moments of color to it. i understand that the theme is B & W, but the effects around/after 0:16 were super dope the video needed a little more of that.

clean edit, just a boring one.

I've said this to you on skype a few times and will say again: If you're not happy with your edit/feel like it needs improvement, don't fucking upload it. For now you're known as that one guy who pumps out decent but blank videos every week. They watch your videos, because at the moment they're probably in the top 20% of toribash videos. But secretly in their minds they're all waiting for a datskip upload. Why? Because it gives them what you can't, creativity, variety and top notch quality.

Sorry i had to break it down to you in a harsh-ish way, but you seem not be listening on skype :/ All i wanted to say, is put more effort in your videos, man. You have the talent, but not enough patience.

Looks like slys style and he used the same eye effect looked way too similar.... looks good but song was bad and like I said looks like sly sloppily put this together. I agree with velair too. U could have amaze edits u just not making it unique just plain af. Gonna start following ur channel tho. Can't wait to see u make dope shits

Dude you overestimate me, WAY too much, what the fck dude, I cant do all the shit you tell me to or be creative in any way whatsoever, if i actually find something creative, i try doing it, and then i realize there's no way in hell im gonna achieve it cause i suck fat fucking dick at editing.