Originally Posted by calumfionn

Whats wrong with the music? I thought it went pretty well with the video. The timing on the music for the hits were good. Still not sure why people don't like the music. I do .

Originally Posted by K0HTA

I never said anything about the hit timing with the music, my complaint was that the music started too intrusively at the beginning of the video. I would have like it to start soft and intensify as the action started up and not just begin in my face from the get go.

Originally Posted by quantumroxas

Nice vid man, I highly appreciate what you did.
The effects....everything. The thing that is bugging me is the music. Try choosing a different genre.

Originally Posted by K0HTA

I'm going to have to agree on that, the music just doesn't do it for me.

Throwing my personal music taste aside here is what I have to say. You picked a bad part of the song to start it at, the moment I started that video I felt uncomfortable and not entertained at all. You should trying starting the music at a low volume and slowing increasing it for the opening bit to make it flow smoothly or start the beginning of the video with the beginning of the song.

Besides the music I felt it was way to dark, don't put a dark Tori on a Dark background, it makes the viewer strain to see whats going on instead of just enjoying the video.

Effects wise from what I could see you did a pretty good job and the key frames were okay.

Also dude you should take a note from other editors and add something to the start besides just a black void. Put up your own emblem to represent yourself and have it fade to black or something from that. Don't just start with black, really pull in your viewer from the moment the video starts. Smooth Transitions and branding are everything.