Originally Posted by ThePirateKing
in "Cute girl" the arm on the hip is really off, i can see you're trying to add perspective by foreshortening, but it didn't work that well
"Grabrielle" has the same problem with the arm, actually, it looks worse.. and the face, my god~ it's creepy...
the pose and composition for "Furude Rika" looks way too familiar, so not sure if you copied it or something, but if not, no problems with that one, it looks great!
"Becky's" face is also weird, and her right arm looks abnormally long... also, not sure what it is, but the ass/thighs looks weird, almost as if she's leaning too much on the right cheek..
anyway, your painting/coloring is really good, you just need to work on the faces and proportions a lot more
Thanks a lot!
Yeah, I'm still a beginner when the subject is anatomy. I'm gonna upload some sketches of mine to be further revised.
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Sketches:
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Last edited by iShyion; Jan 28, 2016 at 07:34 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
"Don't play stupid with me...I'm better at it."
you are doing great, I see you have a base.
I see that you are trying some arms bent, when you need to draw arms bent draw the forearm bending in front of the upperarm, it is a curve that makes it look bent not broken or shortened.
one of the girls had her farther leg longer than hers closer leg, I think that was the last of your paintings.
about clothing,
some of folds works some doesnt, try to look more at clothes and copy it the way it is.
emphasize the borders the most, but in the middle of the body emphasize less the folds or it will look weird.
use shading more than lines, clothes doesnt need to be so sharp.
nice style of painting, you are going the right way, keep doing it.
I see that you are trying some arms bent, when you need to draw arms bent draw the forearm bending in front of the upperarm, it is a curve that makes it look bent not broken or shortened.
one of the girls had her farther leg longer than hers closer leg, I think that was the last of your paintings.
about clothing,
some of folds works some doesnt, try to look more at clothes and copy it the way it is.
emphasize the borders the most, but in the middle of the body emphasize less the folds or it will look weird.
use shading more than lines, clothes doesnt need to be so sharp.
nice style of painting, you are going the right way, keep doing it.
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