Originally Posted by
Veoo
Im realizing this sucks.
Cmon don't say that. I usually lurk here but here goes my take.
I've been looking at your recent artwork and you've been improving a lot at a very fast rate, for what I can observe at least.
Yes, this head might not be as good as some of your previous ones but is by no means bad. It looks a little rough but in my opinion it still yields a lot of potential to be a very decent head texture on itself.
- The yellow thing: I'm not sure what this is exactly, so quite frankly I can comment much on it. Looks a little odd but lets see what you've got in store for that. Maybe you can pull it off
-The LED numbers: Imo they would look much nicer if they where plain, as in no shading on top, and slightly thicker. Maybe make them glow a bit if you want them to look more digital-ish, or scrape some parts off with a splatter-like pattern to make it seem as old paint/
-The metal plating: The plate shape as a whole looks really nice, and matches the visor very nicely. The shading is a little off, most likely because its all but tones of green, and the blending style. Don't be afraid to experiment with different colors to create shadows and highlights, such as blue or yellow, maybe even orange, experiment.
Keep up the good work, and don't beat yourself too much. I'm very intrigued what this head will look like when finished.