Ok, so here is what I made so far, if u wanna change anything tell me. I will add some shading soon.

Looks amazing, keep on going

Ok, here is what I added

I don't like the loss of vibrancy of the red nor the diagonal lines. Go back to the first wip and try defining the letters and spacing with a thin black sketch and whatever else you wanna add.

Much better.

what u think bout the cartoony shadow effect?

I'm loving it!

Ok so i added the slogan to the bottom cause it was a bit empty

Perfect. What's your price?